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Hello, my name is Marissa and I am 22 years old. My ethnicity is Cantanese and Italian. I currently live in Staten Island, New York, but you can also find me in the Los Angeles or Miami area. I am very excited to meet new photographers, makeup artist and models to work with. I am interested in high fashion style, fashion, editorial, editorial style, swimwear, fitness, lingerie, casual, glamour,FHM/Maxim style, commercial print ignments. and maybe artistic . This is my job, so not only do I take this seriously but I am extremely pionate about my work. I am fun, creative, and need little to no direction, but am always willing to work with the photographers point of view. I strive to be very professional not only during a shoot but in all aspects of it, as I expect the same treatment from others.